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Way to rep the University brother. Any chance a miniature Rocky was in the brief case?

FWIW... I hope your next video jumps to Benny Benassi & Public Enemy video epicness - like parental advisory warranted. Some big ole' titties will always drive views...

If you can get something along these lines, my level of respect for you Kane will approach an entirely new level.

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HMigfitM7FE

 

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I wish you well and future success. I will however point out some short falls that I observed. Take my comments worth a grain of salt. They're just observations.

The best Rappers got noticed because they either did something different or they were strait from the hood and prisons. You're a white kid with a Combat theme. Either you served in the military or you'll get called on it. The Car was nice but, the meeting with you and your homey and those two wanna be Russian/Croatian Mobsters was just sad. They arrive and drop a brief case and then quietly watch as you walk up and take it without any exchange. WTF? Hint, give them an envelope with a copy of your CD in it. Let them pull the CD out and look at it. They can then nod at you as you drive off, as if it was a good deal. That's being cinematic and pushing the visual story along.

I's suggest playing some war clips in the background to emphasize the combat dialog. Use them sort of like flashbacks when you run the chorus.

Those are my suggestions. Good luck in the future.

P.S. A Blue Shirt!!!!!!!!!!!!  Unless you were in the Navy or Air Force, Blue is out. Blue isn't in the Army or Marines color wheel.

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On 1/11/2016 at 1:28 PM, The Sheriff said:

Way to rep the University brother. Any chance a miniature Rocky was in the brief case?

FWIW... I hope your next video jumps to Benny Benassi & Public Enemy video epicness - like parental advisory warranted. Some big ole' titties will always drive views...

If you can get something along these lines, my level of respect for you Kane will approach an entirely new level.

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HMigfitM7FE

 

Working on getting a porn star in my next video (or the one after).

Thanks for the feedback everyone and thank you for viewing.

Go Bulls!

 

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